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Re: "Myrth" chapter 1
thanks uni. I hate to bribe, but will donate points or review for reviews? Please?
May 4, 2008 -
Re: "Myrth" chapter 3
This is back to the general characters of chapter one so it'd probably be best if ya read that first. 1.3 Interview Taken on 18/06/1971 Zeezor on his Brother Morning, ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: 'I Am' Poetry
While I'm sure I know no more about poetry than you do, I'll give it a shot... Between the ringing choruses And the echoing drumbeats, that form my strong foundation. ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: "Myrth" Chapter 2
This is actually an interview with a different persona from chapter one so you don't have to read it first, but please don't let that stop you. The more reviews ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: "Myrth" chapter 1
I've missed out the foreword here 'cause its not really needed for the plot (like the hobbits bit in lotr), but to sum up, the ancient Gods of Greece, Egypt ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Excerpts from my comedy-fantasy story
As a huge fan and slightly smaller writer of the fantasy-comedy genre (Pratchett and Adams FTW), I really like this. I rate 9/10 for comedy, the one mark you lose ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 3 Circus Boy
Great stuff again. Two tiny critiques, just because they struck me as quite odd: 1. We pay with magic, not money.” Doesn't sound like something you would put on the ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Circus Boy Chapter 1
FOUND IT! (took ten pages to find any of your work louisa!:P) It's well good. I honestly couldn't point out any weaknesses that I don't put into my own work. ...
Apr 9, 2008
